tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post6159689570673619755..comments2023-04-13T04:35:59.923-07:00Comments on Buch Handling: Magpie Tales ... Primordial PleaSusan Lindquisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04039551683129884367noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-57199816274739701472012-08-15T08:12:13.751-07:002012-08-15T08:12:13.751-07:00The pace and rhythm of this poem hints at the desp...The pace and rhythm of this poem hints at the desperation in the pleadings. If that's a 'fast write' I congratulate you.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-46312135812351468722012-08-14T09:53:03.758-07:002012-08-14T09:53:03.758-07:00Your poem has magnificent rhythm, is thought-provo...Your poem has magnificent rhythm, is thought-provoking ... very nice!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-63720695558290366332012-08-14T09:37:00.310-07:002012-08-14T09:37:00.310-07:00I am positive there were many who wish and still d...I am positive there were many who wish and still do that she could have returned, and would have offered a blind eye to her pain and trudged on! Beautiful write for this theme!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-77075543109508904482012-08-14T06:10:36.812-07:002012-08-14T06:10:36.812-07:00My fav lines:
How I sicken of wrappings.
The star...My fav lines:<br /><br />How I sicken of wrappings.<br />The starch, the rustle<br />Sliding over skin <br />Being pulled back<br />Cool air causing spasmsScarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-68390080847960914352012-08-14T05:37:48.244-07:002012-08-14T05:37:48.244-07:00An imaginative, creative response to this week'...An imaginative, creative response to this week's prompt.<br /><br />P. S. Do we really NEED word verification?Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-8455459774263976262012-08-13T19:28:20.955-07:002012-08-13T19:28:20.955-07:00i love the intensity the wolf gives to this piece....i love the intensity the wolf gives to this piece...it makes your repetition really work, giving it a frantic feel....very nice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com