tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post6802613793140078901..comments2023-04-13T04:35:59.923-07:00Comments on Buch Handling: Grey Clouds of Doubt Susan Lindquisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04039551683129884367noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-31888153960130543042014-01-28T15:21:51.013-08:002014-01-28T15:21:51.013-08:00Dark and intense and written with dramatic, unders...Dark and intense and written with dramatic, understated emotion. Wow.Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-31382072208998123962014-01-28T09:03:41.739-08:002014-01-28T09:03:41.739-08:00You convey a mood very well here--and what an amaz...You convey a mood very well here--and what an amazing photo to go along with it. Each stanza could almost stand alone -- well done.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-55326714557082913722014-01-27T15:44:01.007-08:002014-01-27T15:44:01.007-08:00I liked the interplay of figurative versus literal...I liked the interplay of figurative versus literal in your poem and the structure of it...Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-40670213956566397692014-01-25T07:08:48.162-08:002014-01-25T07:08:48.162-08:00Those clouds hang heavy in your words! It feels so...Those clouds hang heavy in your words! It feels so good though when those grey clouds of doubt pass and the sun shines through!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-87111800909203815002014-01-25T06:23:49.077-08:002014-01-25T06:23:49.077-08:00Nice, Susan. I especially like:
A gush of uncenso...Nice, Susan. I especially like:<br /><br />A gush of uncensored feeling<br /> Passion and frustration<br /> Couched in creative energy<br /> Roiling out like a geyser <br />Against the status quo<br /> Grey blah clouds<br /> Weighing me downLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-34382899968583528062014-01-24T14:06:23.945-08:002014-01-24T14:06:23.945-08:00This is very mystical and yet, inward looking. Th...This is very mystical and yet, inward looking. There is tremendous inner turmoil conveyed through the clouds. I get a sense of something akin to a cathartic release ready to burst in a freeing downpour. But will it come? That question hangs, like the grey clouds of doubt, in the repetition of “weighing me down”. A very intense, visceral piece of writing, Susan. <br /><br />And thank you so much for joining the very select (smiles) - but dearly regarded - circle of follower members of my blog. I’m looking forward to reading more of your writing.<br />Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-17225249182060663922014-01-24T12:58:44.831-08:002014-01-24T12:58:44.831-08:00oh i feel you...you def described the grey that ca...oh i feel you...you def described the grey that can invade our lives and hold us down...keep us from experiencing the sunshine in our lives...hard to break free of sometimes as well....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-46474888764561334352014-01-24T12:39:59.255-08:002014-01-24T12:39:59.255-08:00Dark Clouds railing against the status quo. I can ...Dark Clouds railing against the status quo. I can identify with this one. Well expressed.Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-30159124606351486292014-01-24T06:26:13.086-08:002014-01-24T06:26:13.086-08:00Your forceful words and the form of your poem cert...Your forceful words and the form of your poem certainly convey heaviness and discomfort. Very dark clouds can indeed make us feel heavy and helpless. Thankfully, eventually, they disappear.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-11594032970855797502014-01-24T06:03:09.767-08:002014-01-24T06:03:09.767-08:00I understand well what you mean here. There ARE t...I understand well what you mean here. There ARE times when there are clouds hanging above a person that just STAY there even though one 'walks ten miles.' In fact they are with a person day or night. In sun as well as in rain! Hopefully eventually a person learns a way of dealing with those clouds, rendering them helpless, telling the truth (I think of the saying 'the truth will make you free'), or whatever needs to be done to get rid of their toxicity. A deep poem here, Susan.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1816333214036262533.post-80097527434623267532014-01-24T05:55:35.432-08:002014-01-24T05:55:35.432-08:00I have no idea what your dark cloud is, but this o...I have no idea what your dark cloud is, but this one has me nodding in agreement over my own. Intense writing.Veehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00618654361869856894noreply@blogger.com