Ponytail by Last Exit
smoke signals
those early days
burnt hot
smouldering
experiences
that we banked like
coals
saving the memories
grey tendrils curling
grey tendrils curling
upward to scent the
air
until we needed
warmth
then we each found
coals that glowed
yours in your eyes
mine in my fingertips
just enough heat
to start a fire
wisps of smoke
from seasoned wood
and then a flame
a fire worthy of
december’s chill
This poem is shared with the writers who contribute to Tess Kinkaid's weekly writing circle called
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Coals that glowed
ReplyDeleteyours in your eyes
mine in my fingertips
just enough heat
to start a fire
Such blissful hopes for young hearts. Nicely Susan!
Hank
I really like the ending, Susan.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous (read it several times now)! Love the ending =)
ReplyDeleteVery nicely worded.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful smoke signals! One of the benefits to staying indoors during those December chills!
ReplyDeleteWow, this is tremendous!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous write...
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