Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Smoke Signals - Mag 170



Ponytail by Last Exit


smoke signals

those early days burnt hot
smouldering experiences
that we banked like coals
saving the memories
grey tendrils curling
upward to scent the air
until we needed warmth
then we each found
coals that glowed
yours in your eyes
mine in my fingertips
just enough heat
to start a fire 
wisps of smoke
from seasoned wood
and then a flame
a fire worthy of
december’s chill


This poem is shared with the writers who contribute to Tess Kinkaid's weekly writing circle called 
The Mag - to see what others have given this week, click the link and read on ... perhaps you will be inspired to join in.



7 comments:

  1. Coals that glowed
    yours in your eyes
    mine in my fingertips
    just enough heat
    to start a fire

    Such blissful hopes for young hearts. Nicely Susan!

    Hank

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  2. I really like the ending, Susan.

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  3. This is gorgeous (read it several times now)! Love the ending =)

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  4. Beautiful smoke signals! One of the benefits to staying indoors during those December chills!

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