Painting: A Bowl of Lemons - Julian Merrow-Smith
This Evening
Slicing Lemons
My sharp knife
halves the orbs.
Oily fragrance
coats my fingertips.
I twist juice
from their yellow cups,
and in their
mist I squint and see a yellow sun,
a bright green
awning, the gnarled hands of
that Spanish
elder presenting me a
burst of lemon
coolness in the searing heat
of old Granada.
My fingers
remember the slippery
chill of the red clay cup.
I can tilt my
head back and feel the ache
from that first cold swallow.
I squint and
see the Sierra Nevada
through the
icy fumes rising
from that
citrus nectar –
all this,
all this
before my kitchen counter.
shared at Poetry Jam
Beautiful poem, and equally beautiful painting. Both resonate long after.
ReplyDeletemmm...first, love me some fresh lemon/lime..
ReplyDeletei like too that you attached it to a memory
as i have some similar...very cool piece...
all right there...taking you/us back
Absolutely beautiful, Susan. Exquisite. What more can I say?
ReplyDeleteIt is so true that food has the power to bring back memories, even those we thought we had forgotten. Your poem illustrates this beautifully.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I really like the painting that you shared. And secondly, your poem is stellar. Love the imagery...such as
ReplyDelete"the gnarled hands of
that Spanish elder presenting me a
burst of lemon coolness in the searing heat
of old Granada."
You really ROCKED this prompt!
Beautiful! I just posted (and ate!) one of my Meyer lemon recipes, then I come here and find this ode to that most versatile fruit, the lemon, and my favorite flavor! Oh to be a poet like you!
ReplyDeleteDelightful and mouth watering poem, this really is a vivid portrait. Almost makes me want to like lemons.
ReplyDeleteNever Imagined that squeezing lemon can be so beautifully poetic. I loved the images of icy fumes and yellow sun.
ReplyDeleteWith an imagination you can be transported to anywhere in the world and not leave the kitchen. Beautiful imagery and well penned piece.
ReplyDeleteMmmm. Love this! I can almost smell and taste it. There is nothing better than a fresh squeezed lemonade, ice cold - unless it was one in one of those clay cups. Now I want summer - with lemonade, please. Gorgeous painting shared also.
ReplyDeleteAromas can bring back so much! I love the smell of lemons too--goes so well with memory of a hot day.
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