Sunday, May 6, 2012

The Mag - Fast Writing ...

                                                                                                             
 Image: River Irwell by R.A.D. Stainforth

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I dreamt …

Shades of green pass by
As we skim along
I look downward
Your hand trailing under the water
You always have been one
For both worlds
I reach to splash
Look into eyes that reflect
The clouds and sky
Yes, you always have been one
With both worlds

I walked to the river this morning
Whispered down and up
Come back to me …


Dear Reader,

Fast writing is so very difficult, but that was the writing challenge for this morning .... look at an image and write to it ... the image is haunting to me, as is the mood of the 'fast write'.  I will return to it most likely and maybe it will lead to something new, maybe different words, maybe a title ... but, until then, here is an offering for The Mag ...

Susan




12 comments:

  1. i THINK YOU DID PRETTY DANG GOOD. iF THAT WAS FAST WRITE I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE ONE THAT TOOK TIME.
    http://leah-jamielynn.typepad.com/blog/

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  2. Wonderful! I love the refrain 'you always have been one for both worlds'. This is haunting!

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  3. not bad at all for a fast write...your words are haunting as it calls to min images of someone under the water...or maybe someone that is dead but comes back to visit you while you are out there...

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  4. I do love the *both worlds*.......

    I also love a fast write! Keeps me on my toes and often leaves me with the start of a new story on those writery-blocky

    Well done!
    :)

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  5. I think you did a marvelous job!

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  6. You always have been one
    For both worlds

    I like this...and you did a great job with your fast write!

    =)

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  7. "You always have been one for both worlds"... I love that...

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  8. Fast writing, perhaps. But very good writing...

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  9. Sometimes, fast writing brings forth true emotions. This is gorgeous.

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  10. I love the repeating line Susan....you did a wonderful fast write! :-)

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  11. I think all my writing is fast - once I get started! LOL

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