Degas - Woman With a Towel
Morning Bath
You said “Stop!”
And I, a coquette,
Languished
I murmured, “What?”
And you, a rogue,
Smiled
You chuckled.
And I, a vixen,
Ran …
Degas' bathing women can inspire a sense of stolid domesticity, but this model's round beauty and arched pose brings to mind a tease show or a playful attitude. I so wish that she would peek back at the artist so that her facial expression could finish the flirtation.
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marvelous! have a great week!
ReplyDeleteThis is the kind of non-poem poem I enjoy, unpretentious, witty, amusing, as well as deep enough for a quick double take.
ReplyDeleteNon-poem poem ... this is the kind of oxymoron I love! Hope your week is starting well, Friko!
DeleteIntriguing - and so well written.
ReplyDeletehaha i like the playfulness in this...def it brings out the tease...run, but not too fast...smiles.
ReplyDeleteSuccinct fun indeed!
ReplyDeletecool fun one!
ReplyDeleteI am truly amazed how that painting has taken us venturing into new paths...
ReplyDeletepaint me in many hues, not just black
Clever one...
ReplyDeleteMade me smile,
ReplyDeleteThis is just perfect!
ReplyDeleteTruly very nice, coquettish!
ReplyDeleteWonderful :-)
ReplyDeleteSo cute. What fun!
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